They need a break in between catastrophes!
The other thing I would have changed was to have left out at least one or two of the additional stumbling blocks she threw up between Gideon and Ava. This book didn't really add anything to the overall story that couldn't have been shortened and put in a final book. In my opinion, Sylvia should have kept this story as a trilogy as was originally planned. How would you have changed the story to make it more enjoyable?
I love the timber of her voice and I could listen to her read the phone book! I have not read the printed version.so I can't speak to that. Jill is the perfect narrator for this book for me. Would you consider the audio edition of Entwined With You to be better than the print version? Overall - If you like lots and lots of steamy sex, you will love this book. She's got a velvety, sexy voice, and she can do a pretty good guy voice too! Her performance lends class to the story. I want to see everything tied up with a big happy bow, but I fear Gideon and Ava will just F*#& for 15 of the next 20 book-hours and then die stuck together. five books for a romance? I'm torn whether to continue with the series. Why? This isn't the conclusion to the trilogy we expected, so the author adds stupid fluff to stretch the series. Except for some good stuff toward the end, it's all over the place with side characters and little filler subplots. There's a saying that applies here, "Less is more." The first two books had a great story line but in this one the story stagnates. but I'm getting really bored with the constant sex. The problem is that I love the story of Ava and Gideon, their tortured pasts and their hot chemistry. I listened to Bared to You and Reflected in You and didn't learn my lesson about this series. I would have cut at least half of the sex scenes, deleted 4 out of 5 times that they said "I love you" or called each other their pet names and I would have insisted that Sylvia Day actually finish the story as she promised. If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from Entwined With You? How could the performance have been better? Will never buy another book in the series. Suddenly turning a 3 parter into a 5 parter surely breaks the contract between writer and reader, even if it is only a moral contract. If I had thought about it sooner and if Audible did not have such a difficult returns policy, I would return it. There was no plot development or character development and if I heard him growl "Angel" one more time, I was gonna throw up. The story is stretched so thin, it's like wet toilet paper, and just as enticing. The first two were great and were moving along nicely with a great storyline and great characters and now the third part of a trilogy suddenly becomes a the third part of a five books series. What would have made Entwined With You better?
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